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Thursday 23 July 2020

Writing

L.I to use the 10-5-7-10-10 method to write a story

To the top
Lara let out a gasp as she reached up for the next finger hold. She could feel the sun on her shoulders; only halfway up the climb and her skin was slick with sweat.
When she reached the halfway point Lara lost all hope, then she thought of the intense training that Lara did for a year to get this opportunity of a lifetime to climb the tallest mountain in the world. Getting to the top would not be easy though, she knew that she had to use every muscle in her body to get to the top of Mt. Either.
Lara uses the climbers technique to rest for a bit in order to regain some strength. She started her ascend to the top again but the last 10 metres would be the toughest challenge yet. Lara reached the point where all the other climbers had quit their climb. She was not like them though, Lara went on to the slipperiest and sharpest rocks and had no trouble getting through it.

Finally Lara had done it; she had beaten all the other climbers to the top of MT. Either. In tears of joy she was the happiest she had ever been looking at the beautiful orange sunset. 
This week for writing we did the 10-5-7-10-10 challenge. This is a version of the 5-7-10 challenge but we had more time to plan our writing which made it easier to write.

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