Writing

L.I to identify the parts of a narrative

We started writing the hook of our narrative, a hook is the part that tells the problem of the story. We had an additional character to help our main characters throughout the story. We had choose from one of two problems, They were finding a cure for living life in reverse and the second problem was finding out why there are so many natural disasters happening in the city of Los Angeles.

Narrative

L.I to get our narrative finished.

Today for writing we had get our narrative checked by Mr. Ogilvie, finished and illustrated.
Here are the narrative and pictures.

Long ago there was a villain called Killer Sting. He wanted to conquer the world, but it wasn't easy for him because of a fighter named Ben. He had mystical powers and always beat the villain, sometimes easily and sometimes barely. These mystical powers were passed down generation by generation.The fighter in the present day Brandon was very rich, so decided to go to the 100 years in to the future with a time machine. When the fighter arrived, he saw a world with robots that served humans and floating hover boards. He was so amazed by the technology that he almost fainted.

The people had to do nothing but just relax. After seven hours of decision making he decided to stay. The villain in Brandon’s original timeline saw that he wasn’t there, he laughs  and started planning his attack. In the future Brandon is relaxing in peace. The villain attacked. It only took him half of a day to destroy half of the world.

Brandon’s workers went into the future and tried to convince him to come back. They also said that the villain has destroyed half of the world.Brandon replied that it is of no use going back as he has already destroyed half of the world, but he did not know that if the villain destroyed the present, the future would not exist. In a day he destroyed the world in the present. As soon as he destroyed the present, the future was destroyed too and there was nothing left.

Villain - Killer sting.

Fighter - Brandon

The end.