LI: To edit our writing using DRAFT
This week for writing we wrote abstract noun poems in pairs. An abstract noun is something that exists but cannot be touched. Our abstract noun poem was about happiness. An abstract noun includes the 5 senses (Touch/ feel, taste, hear, see and smell), punctuation ( Capital letters, .), complex sentences, metaphors and similes After we finished writing our poems we used the DRAFT (Delete, Rearrange, Add, Fix, Talk) process to check our poem, with draft we can make correct errors in our writing.
Hi Vayan,
ReplyDeleteYour poem is really nice and amazing, it really is outstanding work. I really like the use of your vocabulary and the idea behind the poem. It really stands out to me. I think you should add more into your definition and explanation on what Abstract Nouns and DRAFT are to give us a more in depth idea of what you were trying to showcase in your poem.
Good job and keep up all this amazing work!
Thanks Chris, I think our poem turned out really well. What was your poem about?
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