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Thursday 28 May 2020

Poem

L.I to write a poem that describes our ancestors

We created a poem that talks about our ancestors and how they shaped me and who I am today. We also used our cultural words and phrases. Our poems we about our culture, the treasures passed down from our ancestors and our cultural food. I liked doing these poems because it was about our culture. 


2 comments:

  1. Hi Vayan

    Awesome poem. I really like the way you have acknowledged your religion and the indentured labours who were brought from India ( Girmitiyas ).
    I am glad to see that you are so proud of your Identity.

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  2. Hi Vayan,
    I really do enjoy reading your poem. I really like how you also included how your ancestors came to unknown lands, and did labour to provide your family a better life. Were there any parts of the poem, that you found difficult to write?

    Good Job Vayan! Keep up the great work!

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