Editing recounts

L.I to revise and edit a recount.

For writing we wrote a recount about Kiwi Sport, Kiwi Can, or Music. I wrote mine about Kiwi Sport. Then things got fun, we had to make our partners writing better by using the skills that we learned from three weeks ago using these marking rules.

Points system.

1 point for every change/addition made

1 point if an adjective is added

1 point is an adverb is added

2 points if the title was reworked to be more interesting

2 points if the word said is changed to be more interesting

2 points if punctuation is added (Exclamation, Question mark, Ellipsis, speech marks)

5 points if the sentence has been developed using our strategy from 3 weeks ago

5 points if the changes makes TREE more visible

-2 points if a capital letter is used outside of beginning of a sentence and a persons name

-10 points if there is only Full stops and/or commas

-20 points if only adjectives have been added

-20 points if there is under 10 changes and/or the changes didn’t make sense